Wow, this is immeasurably powerful in sentiment expressed and abundantly beautiful. It pierces the reader with the dual current of beauty and grief, with that of a love once felt and lost, and enveloping it all is an ethereal atmosphere, one suffused with the rawness of human feeling. Loved this read.
thank you so so much for your insight!! it's extremely valuable to hear what my stuff evokes, and the perspective and experience someone has when reading it. greatly appreciated 🤍
I really like "each room corner / a watchtower." It feels like this person is trapped in a panopticon - they can be easily viewed, but they cannot see the viewer. I also like the presence of the swan - hugging the neck of the swan, even! I think I remember reading that swans represent fidelity (maybe they mate for life? idk), but the neck of a swan seems so delicate and so easily broken. This would seem to represent a termination of that fidelity - and end to a promise. Thanks for sharing this
thank you for sharing your thoughts, i love how you interpreted the symbols! i did not consciously make these specific connections, but maybe some similar meaning has subconsciously emerged from my brain. I don't always know what my symbols symbolise while i write. it's super interesting to hear, i appreciate it 🤍
i appreciate the intent, but i do not want my own art to be fed to ai without my consent. also, you should be upfront about the use of ai on your page, because some people do not want to associate with that in artistic domains. i'm sorry, but i have to be honest and stand up for my values
Wow, this is immeasurably powerful in sentiment expressed and abundantly beautiful. It pierces the reader with the dual current of beauty and grief, with that of a love once felt and lost, and enveloping it all is an ethereal atmosphere, one suffused with the rawness of human feeling. Loved this read.
thank you so so much for your insight!! it's extremely valuable to hear what my stuff evokes, and the perspective and experience someone has when reading it. greatly appreciated 🤍
I really like "each room corner / a watchtower." It feels like this person is trapped in a panopticon - they can be easily viewed, but they cannot see the viewer. I also like the presence of the swan - hugging the neck of the swan, even! I think I remember reading that swans represent fidelity (maybe they mate for life? idk), but the neck of a swan seems so delicate and so easily broken. This would seem to represent a termination of that fidelity - and end to a promise. Thanks for sharing this
thank you for sharing your thoughts, i love how you interpreted the symbols! i did not consciously make these specific connections, but maybe some similar meaning has subconsciously emerged from my brain. I don't always know what my symbols symbolise while i write. it's super interesting to hear, i appreciate it 🤍
This is beautiful and full of imagery, I liked it very much 🤍🤍
thank you so much! 😊🤍
Great one I made a recital of your poem and supplemented it with music in the background. Hope you and your readers enjoy it – https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ngfOs_p0UxI1PYh9LPJbVUMmuBzlQL1-/view?usp=sharing
Feel free to use! It’s a gift, as I’m working on bringing poetry to life by making it multi-sensory! :)
thank you so much! could you tell me who recited it?
You'd probably be amazed and disappointed in equal measure, but the voice was made with AI. It captures the emotion so well nevertheless, right?
i appreciate the intent, but i do not want my own art to be fed to ai without my consent. also, you should be upfront about the use of ai on your page, because some people do not want to associate with that in artistic domains. i'm sorry, but i have to be honest and stand up for my values